Asbury Park, New Jersey, US
Jan 14 13 03:35 pm Link
Lake Forest, California, US
They are good, but the editing was done strange.
What are you shooting with?
The framing is a bit odd as well, but overall, they are okay, nothing that makes me say wow
Jan 14 13 04:56 pm Link
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US
The over effect is face looks over exposed
Your choice of lighting is highlighting the bags under the models eyes
Over all a distracting background, there is nice background blur, but the colors are too bold
Same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead
Best pose and composition
Get rid of the bricks by cropping off left side of photo and this would be a better background
Again same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead
Over all appearance is very flat lighting
Jan 21 13 02:09 am Link
Tarrytown, New York, US
The second shot is my favorite!
Jan 21 13 09:08 am Link