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Photographer

MC OConnor

Posts: 68

Asbury Park, New Jersey, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f3757fdc951_m.jpg


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f378ed01873_m.jpg


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f3762329195_m.jpg

Jan 14 13 03:35 pm Link

Photographer

AlyssaMichelle Photo

Posts: 512

Lake Forest, California, US

They are good, but the editing was done strange.
What are you shooting with?
The framing is a bit odd as well, but overall, they are okay, nothing that makes me say wow

Jan 14 13 04:56 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9276

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f3757fdc951_m.jpg
The over effect is face looks over exposed
Your choice of lighting is highlighting the bags under the models eyes
Over all a distracting background, there is nice background blur, but the colors are too bold

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f378ed01873_m.jpg
Same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead
Best pose and composition

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f3762329195_m.jpg
Get rid of the bricks by cropping off left side of photo and this would be a better background
Again same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead
Over all appearance is very flat lighting

Jan 21 13 02:09 am Link

Model

ksn modeling

Posts: 24

Tarrytown, New York, US

The second shot is my favorite!

Jan 21 13 09:08 am Link