Jan 14 13 03:35 pm Link They are good, but the editing was done strange. What are you shooting with? The framing is a bit odd as well, but overall, they are okay, nothing that makes me say wow Jan 14 13 04:56 pm Link The over effect is face looks over exposed Your choice of lighting is highlighting the bags under the models eyes Over all a distracting background, there is nice background blur, but the colors are too bold Same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead Best pose and composition Get rid of the bricks by cropping off left side of photo and this would be a better background Again same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead Over all appearance is very flat lighting Jan 21 13 02:09 am Link The second shot is my favorite! Jan 21 13 09:08 am Link |