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Top Five

Posts: 39

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Just added some pictures from my photo-shoot around Boston. Let me know what you guys think. Would love to hear criticism, positive and/or negative, so I can continue to improve.


Thanks!


Marcus

Jan 18 13 03:44 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9248

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9cd35e9c15_m.jpg
Nice image, could have photographer blur the background more to make it less distracting

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/00/50dab145525fb_m.jpg
If the idea is to sell designer clothing, then the hands out of the pockets would rumple the clothing less [Crossed arms]
With short hair, some times more flattering to show just one ear

Looks like a good start

Jan 18 13 04:22 pm Link

Model

Top Five

Posts: 39

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Lee_Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9cd35e9c15_m.jpg
Nice image, could have photographer blur the background more to make it less distracting

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/00/50dab145525fb_m.jpg
If the idea is to sell designer clothing, then the hands out of the pockets would rumple the clothing less [Crossed arms]
With short hair, some times more flattering to show just one ear

Looks like a good start

Thanks a lot. Two great ideas, will definitely keep them in mind.

Jan 18 13 05:04 pm Link

Model

Abby Hawkins

Posts: 2004

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Ah I can't pass up a chance to talk about Boston!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9ce4533b46_m.jpg

This is a really cool shot -- my only qualm is that it's a little too processed.  Combine that with the tag and something is taken away.

You've got a lot of great potential.  Best of luck as you continue to work with photographers and build up your portfolio.  The city is packed to the brim with talent!

Jan 18 13 05:16 pm Link

Model

Top Five

Posts: 39

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Abby Hawkins wrote:
Ah I can't pass up a chance to talk about Boston!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9ce4533b46_m.jpg

This is a really cool shot -- my only qualm is that it's a little too processed.  Combine that with the tag and something is taken away.

You've got a lot of great potential.  Best of luck as you continue to work with photographers and build up your portfolio.  The city is packed to the brim with talent!

Thanks a lot for the critique and kind words. Best of luck to you as well!

Jan 18 13 11:12 pm Link