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Ashayla Webster
Posts: 525
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
mmmmm....weenie hut please
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E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
aliceelou012 wrote: Weenie hut please! Good: you are an extremely pretty girl with a lovely face. Pose wise this is your best: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 6#31449005 Bad: You need to work with better photographers. Expression wise, I want you to branch away from the smirk look in your avatar. For some reason when you do that look you open your eyes far too widely, almost looking a little creepy. rellaaaaxxx. But mainly work with better photographers, since you're gorgeous.
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Jem Iredale
Posts: 1769
Merrimac, Massachusetts, US
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Mayzelle Rose
Posts: 29
Branson, Missouri, US
Weenie hut critique for me...
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E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Angeli Li wrote: Any bad photos/good photos in my port? thanks! Your best photo is your avatar. Makes an awesome commercial shot! You look very energetic and refreshing here. Bad: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30676902 I get you're a wardrobe stylist, but this shot shouldn't be in your modeling port.
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E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Brittney Denea wrote: Weenie Hut? Now I want a hot dog! Also, should I try to submit photos to any magazines? Good: You are very pretty and have amazing eyes. You also have an amazing figure and seem to rock the pin up look. I like your pose and expression in this shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30644096 Bad: Consistency. Your port is all over the place. Some good shots, some not so good shots. Be selective about the shots you put in your port. Also, when you pose, anything you move toward the photographer will be bigger. Meaning if you move your face closer toward then the rest of your body, the torso is shortened, and the legs are shortened, while making your head larger. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30898820 This shot is an example, and you have better versions of this shot in your port. With the images you currently have, you could submit to a lesser magazine like a web one. But major magazines would likely not take those shots. When you work with better photograhers then submit, because your look is good.
Photographer
Sven Lori
Posts: 278
Brussels, Brussels, Belgium
Give me some hard critics :-)
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Meaghan Monaghan
Posts: 71
Astoria, New York, US
Let me have it between the eyes! Give me that salty critique! Feel better!
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Sven Lori
Posts: 278
Brussels, Brussels, Belgium
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Cameron J Wright wrote: Feeling a bit salty best way to improve imo Alright, you're very new, I can tell. Salty here though. One, DO NOT CROP LIMBS if you do not know how to crop off limbs correctly. You keep cropping below the elbow, which is awkward. You also crop out elbows a few times. NO. BAD. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 9#31493061 This shot bothers me. It makes the llama look awful. The lighting makes her look tired and disproportionate. What you need to improve on is cropping, angles, lighting, and variety. Shoot at a straight angle, not down on your llamas. Shoot some more full body shots or beauty shots. Hopefully this helps a little bit.
Photographer
R M A
Posts: 11
Los Angeles, California, US
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Acanthus Tattoos wrote: Weenie Hut Jr.
Yesssshhhh you're the first. For one, I never think you're 43. You look younger. You have a GREAT body and great tattoos, and I think your best look is your smile. Your teeth are still perfectly white. I love that confidence and abilty to be so free spirited and youthful. Keep it up lady!
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Acanthus Tattoos
Posts: 435
Union, New Jersey, US
Samantha Emme wrote: Yesssshhhh you're the first. For one, I never think you're 43. You look younger. You have a GREAT body and great tattoos, and I think your best look is your smile. Your teeth are still perfectly white. I love that confidence and abilty to be so free spirited and youthful. Keep it up lady! thank you!!
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E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Acanthus Tattoos wrote: thank you!! Thank you for bumping this lol. To the rest I will keep coming back to finish these up every now and then. It's a slow process and sometimes I will be taking breaks to get my brain working again. Thank you for your patience.
Photographer
Norman Ding
Posts: 68
New York, New York, US
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Shelly Foster
Posts: 53
Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada
I'll have the Weenie hut critique please
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Mary Zdo
Posts: 176
San Ramon, California, US
Man, even though my portfolio is basically nonexistent right now I'm really tempted to post in this awesome thread anyway. So here goes nothing, Weenie Hut please? Hopefully I won't have to drag myself to Weenie Hut General after from the pain.
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L Raye
Posts: 5045
Petaluma, California, US
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V I S T A S
Posts: 58
Albuquerque, New Mexico, US
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Sky Donohue
Posts: 265
Salt Lake City, Utah, US
I pick the salty spoon, please!
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