Forums > Digital Art and Retouching > DAR Critiques > critique my HDR please

Photographer

zssphotography

Posts: 56

UPPER DARBY, Pennsylvania, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130128/17/51072c44c27e3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130121/17/50fde83e47bda_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130121/17/50fdedbfb7633_m.jpg

thank you

Jan 28 13 07:48 pm Link

Retoucher

Ledo retouch

Posts: 1156

Lodi, California, US

I think you've ended up with lesser images going with tone mapped files.
The sky is very nice in the bottom shot, and of course some things really
pop with extreme clarity, but overall these don't do much for me. For
examples of HDR of people done right, check some work of Joel Grimes
and Blair Bunting for Discovery.

Jan 30 13 11:31 pm Link