Forums > Critique > Serious Critique > rip my port to pieces...

Model

D Massey

Posts: 33

San Javier, Murcia, Spain

hey everyone, my ports in need of some serious critiqueing, all feedback will be much appreciated! xoxo

Feb 18 13 05:22 am Link

Makeup Artist

ArtistryImage

Posts: 2836

Washington, District of Columbia, US

enchanting runway imagery... 

And an awesome smoky eye smile
wonderful synergy on this vision...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130218/05/51222811f37e5.jpg

albeit I've never been a huge fan of face metal...
don't believe it lends itself to the narrative here...

all the best on your journey...

Feb 18 13 06:05 am Link

Photographer

Jay Strange

Posts: 127

Tampa, Florida, US

You have a few available spaces in your port...why not add a great headshot...maybe a smile or some goofing around stuff as well?

Feb 18 13 03:24 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

You have a very nice look, and port!

My favourite image of yours would have to be this one:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31704402

It's a great pose, and shows off your beautiful facial features. I would suggest it to be your profile image, but your current one is nice, too.

My least favourite would have to be this one:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31704382

It's more of an ugly-pretty type of photo. The facial expression you have just doesn't attract me, and I would suggest you delete it. Just my opinion. smile

Keep up the great work!

Feb 18 13 04:45 pm Link