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Model

D A N I

Posts: 4600

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Yes it's me again (are you tired of seeing me yet?). I added new photos but I only want to keep what would help me, if anything. I'm trying to escape from the "ghetto fabulous hobby model" style.

I'm changing my hair back to dark brown in a few weeks so please excuse that from my photos if possible.

What should stay, what should go, and please elaborate why you feel this way.

May 21 13 08:33 am Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4600

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

No one?

May 21 13 11:30 am Link

Photographer

Bravo Magic Images

Posts: 765

Temple City, California, US

Life sucks some times babe. Keep on Keeping on.... stay Kool.

May 21 13 11:35 am Link

Model

AnnieS

Posts: 34

Bountiful, Utah, US

Just took a look at your portfolio and I think you are beautiful and I love your red hair so much!  Do what makes you feel happy but I love the red hair!  smile xox

May 21 13 11:42 am Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4600

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Bravo Magic Images wrote:
Life sucks some times babe. Keep on Keeping on.... stay Kool.

That doesn't answer my OP

May 21 13 11:57 am Link

Photographer

Matthew Gwinn

Posts: 131

Ypsilanti, Michigan, US

Get rid of this one for sure. It's out of focus
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130503/09/5183e6b61dde8_m.jpg

This one Lacks contrast, but is ok. You probably have better shots
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130515/18/51942f9b421b7_m.jpg

May 21 13 12:18 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4600

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Thank you, Matthew

May 21 13 12:26 pm Link

Model

Paige Morgan

Posts: 4060

New York, New York, US

This should be first:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130503/09/5183e567311ec_m.jpg

Too snapshot looking for a modeling port, and lit poorly.

May 21 13 12:39 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4600

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Paige Morgan wrote:
This should be first:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130503/09/5183e567311ec_m.jpg

Too snapshot looking for a modeling port, and lit poorly.

That's one of my first shoots I've ever done. Not sure I even have it in there still.

Thanks for reminding me to delete it!

May 21 13 12:46 pm Link

Photographer

Marin Photography NYC

Posts: 7319

New York, New York, US

Just come to NYC so we can fix that book of yours and maybe keep you out of these threads! tongue

May 21 13 12:53 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4600

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Marin Photography wrote:
Just come to NYC so we can fix that book of yours and maybe keep you out of these threads! tongue

New York is my first stop when I start traveling this late fall. I NEED all the help I can get...the critique forum is a horrible place sad

May 21 13 01:02 pm Link