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Model

melissa brouwers

Posts: 25

Bree, Limburg, Belgium

Hey, I am just starting as a model and I have new pictures from a shoot. Do you guys have Any advise or comments?

Oct 13 13 09:58 am Link

Photographer

Fototid

Posts: 34

Lund, Skåne, Sweden

While I do like the pictures looking at them together I see that you have the same facial expression in all of them.

So possibly a little variation in lips and eyes.

Oct 13 13 10:25 am Link

Model

melissa brouwers

Posts: 25

Bree, Limburg, Belgium

Oh yeah, now I see. I didn't even notice. Thanks for the advise!

Fototid wrote:
While I do like the pictures looking at them together I see that you have the same facial expression in all of them.

So possibly a little variation in lips and eyes.

Oct 13 13 10:27 am Link

Photographer

maker-creator

Posts: 117

San Jose, California, US

As the other poster said, you definitely need to work on some facial expressions.  I also think you need to round out your portfolio with some full body shots and something that shows a little about your personality.

On a positive note, you're a pretty girl, have nice hair, and don't appear to be all marked up with tattoos which is an added plus.

Michael

Oct 13 13 10:38 am Link

Model

melissa brouwers

Posts: 25

Bree, Limburg, Belgium

Yes, I will work on it! Thank you for the advice. smile


maker-creator wrote:
As the other poster said, you definitely need to work on some facial expressions.  I also think you need to round out your portfolio with some full body shots and something that shows a little about your personality.

On a positive note, you're a pretty girl, have nice hair, and don't appear to be all marked up with tattoos which is an added plus.

Michael

Oct 13 13 10:51 am Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

you dont have a look for fashion so you should concentrate on commercial print- smiles, real life situations, try for advertising looks.  Good luck- btw I started to model with Dominique in Brussels

Oct 13 13 02:04 pm Link