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Beauty Retouch - Would love to know your opinions
Here is a recent edit that I did. I would love to get your inputs so that I can improve my skills.  Before:  After:  Thank you. Oct 19 13 07:33 am Link In my opinion you should not remove mole near her lips Oct 19 13 03:21 pm Link I would have given her face a more feminine shape Oct 20 13 12:13 am Link I think it looks great. Eyes and teeth color are just a bit too similar to skin. Oct 20 13 11:22 am Link Thanks everyone for their feedback.. I totally missed to correct the teeth and eye color.. Thank you for making me understand that I have to concentrate more on the little details.. Oct 23 13 08:18 am Link I'm no expert but I think you did a beautiful job of it so far. Oct 23 13 08:25 am Link Restore the mole and address some of the creases in the gold fabric to make it more pleasing to the eye. Skin looks good to me. Oct 30 13 04:19 am Link take loads of magenta out of her skin, give it a more natural colour. reduce the highlights out of her eye by 50% it looks too fake and take the skin work back by 30% make it more natural Nov 28 13 01:53 pm Link oh and there are loads of distracting cross hairs that draw my eye away from the main focus Nov 28 13 01:54 pm Link Nov 28 13 02:06 pm Link You took some of the shadows out of her face making it look too flat and a bit masculine, she already has a powerful jawline I wouldn't have less definition in her cheeks too. I would definitely address some of the hair and background too. Maybe dial back the skin work a touch so she looks more natural Dec 01 13 08:06 am Link background moves the eyes attention away from the subject, and next time please try and keep the mole as it will remind us that this is a human and not a life like doll in a cartoon series, practice makes perfect ;-) Jan 15 14 05:01 am Link |
