Got some new shots back and have others coming. I'd really love some honest and brutal feedback as I'm wanting to improve what I can from where I am. So please tell me what you like and what you don't. Critique poses, expressions, makeup, hair, weight, complexion, anything that I as the model could improve. If you hurt my feelings trying to help me, I'll forgive you Well, as long as you're being constructive about it Aug 26 05 04:04 pm Link Of the first five you posted, only #3 is decent from a lighting standpoint and on it your face is blown out and the pose isn't the greatest. It's too bad too because you obviously put some time and money into this shoot. Paul Aug 26 05 04:27 pm Link A couple hours of time, but no money involved. As a model, I can't really help lighting standpoints and how the picture is shot. Or can I? If so, what can I do? I can't readily see myself in most shots. I've always thought that paying attention to lighting details was the photographer's job. I know nothing of lighting as it relates to the camera. Could I get some critiques on what I could do to improve as a model? What did you not like about the pose? How could it be improved? Aug 27 05 12:08 am Link no its not your job, but you do need to be aware of the light, unless told otherwise always model towards the main light. but actually i like the lighting in all of the new images.the poses and makeup are really good in my limited experienced opinion. Aug 27 05 12:51 am Link As Robert said, you're correct, you can't but the photographer should be able to tell you to turn your face toward the main light. On the third one, if he hadn't chopped off the top of your head, and had centered you in the image a little more, it could have been a lot better. Paul Aug 27 05 01:13 am Link I wanted to say I was a pleasure to work with you. Making shoots fun is a huge asset. My suggestion is to collect as many publish photos (that you like) and practice matching the poses and take note of where the light are hitting Please feel free to critique my work. Aug 27 05 01:15 am Link Kuzetsu wrote: If you don't feel like you are getting enough direction, you can ask for it. You may have mixed success with this - some photographers go into a shoot with a lot of planning and can give excellent direction, and others work more spontaneously; it can be hard to get direction from someone who doesn't work with a lot of forethought. Aug 27 05 02:23 am Link |