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Photographer

ShiggidyShaq Photos

Posts: 32

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I could use feedback on my 3 recent uploads willing to return the favor if wanted trying to make selection for my portfolio

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2679235/viewall

Nov 02 14 04:05 pm Link

Model

Amber Dawn - Indiana

Posts: 6255

Salem, Indiana, US

They are so so nothing that screams wow amazing.

Nov 02 14 10:02 pm Link

Model

Missy Liss

Posts: 32

Newtown, Wales, United Kingdom

The 1st shot is good, I like it. very relaxed model and I like the post edit (y)

Nov 03 14 01:26 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141101/17/545577ebb1a75_m.jpg
Selective color is not usually seen on professional model photos
Try to avoid using a distracting logo [viewers eyes should be looking at model]

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141101/17/545576d2083cc_m.jpg
Vertical format might work better in this image
You have cropped the models left hand off; generally if you show the elbow include the hand
Blasting the white part of the models eye at camera is not the most effective eye position

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141101/17/545576112d193_m.jpg
Logo very distracting in this image
One of your better images
[Could try a tighter crop photo left, just outside of your logo]

Nov 03 14 04:46 am Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

Number 3 is fine. None of the others is deserving.

Nov 03 14 06:35 am Link