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Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Hi everyone,
So I finally got to do a new female photoshoot.  I've been told a few times that I need to improve the way I shoot girls so I'm hoping you all think these look good.  Anyway, let me know what you think and if you think I should add any of them to my port.  Thanks!

NUMBER 1
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_5937Internet_zps638ee6d5.jpg

NUMBER 2
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_6004Internet_zps27757434.jpg

NUMBER 3
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_5982Internet_zpsa1a09a9d.jpg

NUMBER 4
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_6015Internet_zpscff4d9f6.jpg

NUMBER 5
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_6049Internet_zps7a4f6fc0.jpg

NUMBER 6
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_6160Internet_zps50444c7f.jpg

NUMBER 7
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_6130Internet_zps5eff4cc5.jpg

NUMBER 8
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_6182-Edit_zpsf483462f.jpg

NOTE:
- That's the actual pattern of the purple dress.  It is not a Moire effect.

Nov 19 14 01:49 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Photo 1 what’s not to love, great smile
I would suggest adding to your portfolio

Photo 7 yes for the add

Nov 19 14 03:29 pm Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Lee_Photography wrote:
Photo 1 what’s not to love, great smile
I would suggest adding to your portfolio

Photo 7 yes for the add

Thanks!  I'm thinking of adding 7 to my website but I'm stuck on where to place it.  I have 3 categories on there: headshots (it's obviously not a headshot), portraits (maybe), and editorial (probably not).  What would you consider this?  I mean she did come to me saying she wanted to do a detective/cop shot so she can get those kinds of roles...

Nov 19 14 03:35 pm Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Added number 8.  I am done adding :-)

Nov 19 14 10:48 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Yajhil Alvarez wrote:

Thanks!  I'm thinking of adding 7 to my website but I'm stuck on where to place it.  I have 3 categories on there: headshots (it's obviously not a headshot), portraits (maybe), and editorial (probably not).  What would you consider this?  I mean she did come to me saying she wanted to do a detective/cop shot so she can get those kinds of roles...

I would call it an environmental portrait

Nov 20 14 04:54 am Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

Better, but I suspect some of that, was simply better model.

Nov 20 14 06:54 am Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Lee_Photography wrote:

I would call it an environmental portrait

Thanks!

Nov 20 14 08:51 am Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Lallure Photographic wrote:
Better, but I suspect some of that, was simply better model.

Thanks!  She's totally experienced but I was actually leading, meaning, she would do her thing and then I would ask her to stop on a pose I liked and then ask her to move this and this and adjust it to what I wanted and then I would take the picture so I did work at it.

Nov 20 14 08:54 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 23775

Orlando, Florida, US

#4 is the winner for me Mr. Y  .  .  .  clean, colourful, visually enticing  .  .  .  nicely done  .  .  .

SOS

Nov 20 14 08:55 am Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

sospix wrote:
#4 is the winner for me Mr. Y  .  .  .  clean, colourful, visually enticing  .  .  .  nicely done  .  .  .

SOS

Thanks sospix aka my BFF :-).

Nov 20 14 08:58 am Link