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Model

Destiny Noir

Posts: 49

Clarksville, Tennessee, US

I've finally updated my MM after a bit of a hiatus and would love to hear what you all think about the shots I've chosen for my portfolio on here and why you like or would get rid of them. Thanks!

Nov 20 14 03:57 pm Link

Photographer

PINUPZ PHOTO-ART

Posts: 142

Milwaukee, Wisconsin, US

Hey Destiny,
First off, nice portfolio with many good images. Personally i would get rid of #3 and #8. #3  i dont like the camera angle and its not up to the quality of your other portraits and #8 i dont think the outfit flatters you at all.
Ihat said , the rest are very good. My favorites are #4 the pin up and the last photo in port. Cute eyes, expression and, umm, other things..  smile  Bob

Nov 20 14 04:16 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140426/17/535c50471f6fe_m.jpg
This is your strongest portfolio image

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140808/19/53e5819110204_m.jpg
Cute

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140727/10/53d53bf76aecb_m.jpg
Strong portfolio photo

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140817/22/53f194fcdb238_m.jpg
Keeper, would prefer if hips were placed on angle to camera


Top images in my book

Wish you well

Nov 21 14 05:53 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

PINUPZ PHOTO-ART wrote:
#3  i dont like the camera angle.

+1

It looks like you forgot to rotate the image prior to posting. Awkward.

But just one worthless opinion.   smile

Nov 21 14 10:17 am Link

Model

Destiny Noir

Posts: 49

Clarksville, Tennessee, US

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:

PINUPZ PHOTO-ART wrote:
#3  i dont like the camera angle.

+1

It looks like you forgot to rotate the image prior to posting. Awkward.

But just one worthless opinion smile

I was actually laying horizontally in a pool, but I can see how it looks that way though. Thank you all for your feedback! I appreciate it!

Nov 21 14 10:49 am Link

Photographer

Dave McDermott

Posts: 720

Coill Dubh, Kildare, Ireland

You have some good images which really show your personality.

For me these two are you weakest.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130419/04/517126fecec36.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140416/09/534eb38c8ee3e.jpg

Your face looks weird in the first one. I'm not sure what sort of effect the photographer was going for but it just looks badly edited.

The second one is a snap shot.

Nov 23 14 01:56 am Link

Model

Destiny Noir

Posts: 49

Clarksville, Tennessee, US

Dave McDermott wrote:
You have some good images which really show your personality.

For me these two are you weakest.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130419/04/517126fecec36.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140416/09/534eb38c8ee3e.jpg

Your face looks weird in the first one. I'm not sure what sort of effect the photographer was going for but it just looks badly edited.

The second one is a snap shot.

There was tons of glitter on my face in the first. That may be why is looks oddly edited. Thanks for the feedback, Dave!

Nov 23 14 10:30 am Link