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Hey everyone~ I just put up some new photos from a shoot and I would like feedback on which pictures I should keep/delete. I know I still don't have a full portfolio but I'd rather not waste my space with pictures not up to industry standards. If you have an opinion on my other photos as well, please, critique! https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/3533747/viewall Thank you for your thoughtful input. Dec 03 14 06:04 am Link You're natural. Throw these: 1) https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37308048 - eyes too slanting might create some negativity 2) https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37232966 The bw is good, but the toes+fingers missing a bit and that cut will miss the cut. Most "pro/indutry ppl" will complain this: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37249161 But I like it, cos it's real you. And showing full personable person. Love this one: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37473433 Good grainy, and maybe crop closer (shorter the legs since it's not showing the figure). Dec 03 14 06:29 am Link Why would you do a fashion look, without showing all of the merchandise? Dec 03 14 07:28 am Link What fashion look are you referring to? ^^^ & I'm not the photographer, they choose what's shown/hidden. Dec 03 14 09:23 am Link Dec 03 14 12:49 pm Link Keep #1 & #9 threw #11 Thats my 02.0 Dec 03 14 12:55 pm Link interested in your opinion? Dec 03 14 02:45 pm Link All of those images captured by Kelley Raye are very weak. Hopefully, both of you learned something from it and can move on. Dec 04 14 12:29 pm Link You have a good look , but need to work with better photographers Dec 04 14 12:41 pm Link The pics so far are ok. I mean, they're better than what a lot of other girls have on here so thats a good thing. I'd keep all of them except the last 2, and the bathroom pic. At 5'8 and 118 lbs and a beautiful face, you have a lot of potential. If you truly are serious about a modeling career, i'd invest some money into building a book with professional photographers. Best of luck. Dec 04 14 03:02 pm Link ^ Thank you Jason. ^ Your photography is so lovely, I'll definitely look into high-quality photographers for the future. Love the constructive feedback from everyone. Dec 05 14 08:29 am Link |
