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Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 208

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Top row. Thanks for comments. Enjoy smile
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2877243/viewall 18+

Dec 18 14 02:45 am Link

Photographer

cheshiredave

Posts: 394

Oakland, California, US

You're a spectacular model, but I don't think these new shots are as good as the many great shots in the rest of your port. I would let them all go.

Dec 18 14 02:22 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

Kinda graphic.

#2 has a bad crop of one leg:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37571100

and #4 is not appealing.

But just one worthless opinion.   smile

Dec 18 14 02:31 pm Link

Photographer

Rob Photosby

Posts: 4810

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

#1 is OK, but expands rather than advances your portfolio.

#2 is sort of OK, depending on the opinion of the crop

#3 and #4 are technically poor and the only reason to include them is if you want to make it clear that you are open to more explicit work.

Dec 31 69 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

Eyesso

Posts: 1218

Orlando, Florida, US

I think #1 and #2 have a good artistic sense, nice color photos, gentle poses, not trying too hard, it''s good.

#3 and #4....cliche.

Dec 31 69 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

I think what those four poses show is that you are versatile and comfortable being nude in front of the camera. I like the first 2 the best, as I believe they show your comfort and natural beauty most of all. 3 and 4 aren''t as good, but that does not mean they don''t show some sort of "thinking outside the box" type work. Traditional art nude people might not like them as much because they are a bit different, but remember, different is not bad. It is just........different. Great work and hope to see more of your art very soon!

Dec 31 69 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

LeWhite

Posts: 2038

Los Angeles, California, US

Not up tothe standard of rhe rest of your port probably put them in the middle. Second row black and white as wellas nineth row with bow tie are your best!  Your port kinda looks like "A day in the life of"  type of thing  Make a coffee table book and tell me how much.

Dec 31 69 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

Y E N

Posts: 843

Memphis, Tennessee, US

Very nice, I like the lighting a lot, very open feel to the first two.  Well done

Dec 20 14 04:32 am Link

Artist/Painter

MainePaintah

Posts: 1892

Saco, Maine, US

cheshiredave wrote:
You''re a spectacular model, but I don''t think these new shots are as good as the many great shots in the rest of your port. I would let them all go.

I agree! You are a beautiful model with a perfect figure!  smile
These photos do not do you  justice.
I would not keep them.

Dec 20 14 04:49 am Link

Photographer

F O R B E S

Posts: 576

New York, New York, US

I think they''re are well done. I like them!

Cheers

Dec 20 14 05:44 am Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 208

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Thank to all for commentary and critique, much appreciate. Arya.

Dec 21 14 12:15 am Link