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Model

AnnAdB

Posts: 202

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

Hello, hello,

I could use your opinion on my portfolio. I have deleted some old photos since I am focussing on other genres now. So 18+ is as good as gone. Too bad, since I personally thought that was my best work but would not like to continue in it.

So I could use some good critique on my current portfolio. How can I improve?

Jan 03 15 07:27 am Link

Photographer

Marin Photo NYC

Posts: 7348

New York, New York, US

AnnAdB wrote:
Hello, hello,

I could use your opinion on my portfolio. I have deleted some old photos since I am focussing on other genres now. So 18+ is as good as gone. Too bad, since I personally thought that was my best work but would not like to continue in it.

So I could use some good critique on my current portfolio. How can I improve?

You have good stats, stick to fashion, forget diversity, it's overrated. You have a great look but you need a strong portfolio.  Seek out people who do fashion editorials and build up your book.  Find stylist that are willing to work with you, maybe an up and coming designer and use it as a way to get more trade if that's an issue.  Avoid cheesy concepts. You don't have enough strong images in your portfolio to showcase your beauty.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33022663 ditch it, looks like your cheekbone is swollen.

Jan 03 15 10:38 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141025/13/544c024e4d289_m.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140401/12/533b0e2718163_m.jpg

These two images make me think of you as a model, 5”11” of pure modeling power

Happy New Year

Jan 03 15 01:51 pm Link

Model

AnnAdB

Posts: 202

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

Thank you both for the critique, it's really useful!

Jan 04 15 12:34 pm Link