Forums > Critique > Review on my Portfolio please!

Model

Charlotte_Emily

Posts: 11

Shrewsbury, England, United Kingdom

I've only recently updated my portfolio after the new year, please do let me know what you think smile

Jan 05 15 09:41 am Link

Photographer

Impression PD

Posts: 31

Newark, Ohio, US

Beautiful look Charlotte. You got a deep and artistic array of samples in your port which are eloquently designed and showcase that side of you very well. You may also want to consider a better full length body shot in bikini or lingerie as there still seems to be some mystery as toward your overall physique, which could hinder you in landing more jobs. Also you might want to try a really good headshot of laughing or smiling. Being diverse opens up more avenues and increases your marketability. Continue with the sensational work. Best of luck in 2015.

Jan 05 15 10:46 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

I like what you have done!!!

One suggestion: This is probably your worst image

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130716/09/51e56ea21c829_m.jpg

You might want to replace it with something else when you get a chance (but don't until you get other input).

But just one worthless opinion.   smile

Jan 05 15 04:29 pm Link

Photographer

Howard Tarragon

Posts: 673

New York, New York, US

An excellent portfolio but it needs a couple of additions: 1) a full length shot - the one you have is too far away and more expressions from you. The ones that are up are very much the same.

This is my favorite:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130524/07/519f7eaabc8c5_m.jpg

Jan 06 15 10:57 pm Link

Photographer

Guss W

Posts: 10964

Clearwater, Florida, US

My least favorite
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150105/09/54aac93e7b01c_m.jpg

Nice variety except for expression.  And thinking of expression, the last two are too much alike in expression.  I'd suggest dropping the more manipulated one of you in yellow.

Jan 09 15 10:51 pm Link