Lallure Photographic wrote:
Fashion is about selling the garments........whether you do that in a straight forward manner, or through "lifestyle" implication.

I see neither in either image.

Thank for your opinion Lallure, i have understood what you mean, i'll take care about it in my next shooting

Garry k wrote:
the biggest problem with the first photo is that it appears that the model only has one arm
the biggest problem with the second photo is that the from the high angle the shot was taken from - the model appears short

Two holy notes Garry...
for the first, now that you have written, it has been obvious to me too, sometimes when we look at an image for too much time, we lose the details... for the second, it is also true... the perspective makes a little short the model.

Garry k wrote:
the second biggest problem with both photos is that there is too much background and not enough subject

this is also true, but this is only two shoots, every look and situation are narrated by more different shoots, someone more detailed, someone with much space for graphical inserts or texts, like these.