Jennifer Haggerty wrote:
You need to include NSFW on your post. I just opened that up in the office and immediately had to close it... I can't review it until I leave the office.

Sorry, I thought I just need to put it into M category.

dd photography wrote:
your watermark kills a very nice photo.

I will remember it next time. Thanks!

Photogenic Reaction wrote:

Sorry, I thought I just need to put it into M category.

No worries. My mature filter is turned off for the home but when at work and looking at forums the settings are saved so it's a surprise when I open it and it's M material.

Peach Jones wrote:
I like the pose and I like the lighting. Thinking it would be stronger in B/W......maybe?

Or maybe adjust the color to lessen the yellow, but a nice image, lovely model

Victoria Elle wrote:
It's beautifully lit, but the color seems off to me.  She's very orange, like she just got a spray tan.  From this image I had assumed she was Hispanic, with black or very dark brown hair.  I was surprised to find when I looked at her modeling port that she is actually a fairly pale redhead.  I doesn't look bad necessarily, but it's something to think about, and maybe examine your post-work, or lighting temp/gels on set.

I would also consider cloning out that chunk of hair that escaped over her shoulder.  The shape of it isn't deliberate enough to me that it adds to the image, and it breaks up the beautiful line of her arm.

Thanks for your advise. I will definitely look into that.

Matt Blais Photography wrote:

Or maybe adjust the color to lessen the yellow, but a nice image, lovely model

Let me do some PS and let you know the result. Thanks!!!

Peach Jones wrote:
I like the pose and I like the lighting. Thinking it would be stronger in B/W......maybe?

Good idea! Let me try it!

Victoria Elle wrote:
It's beautifully lit, but the color seems off to me.  She's very orange, like she just got a spray tan.  From this image I had assumed she was Hispanic, with black or very dark brown hair.  I was surprised to find when I looked at her modeling port that she is actually a fairly pale redhead.  I doesn't look bad necessarily, but it's something to think about, and maybe examine your post-work, or lighting temp/gels on set.

I would also consider cloning out that chunk of hair that escaped over her shoulder.  The shape of it isn't deliberate enough to me that it adds to the image, and it breaks up the beautiful line of her arm.

Would you please take a look at some other photos in my portfolio with the same model and give your suggestion? Thanks a million!!!