Forums > Critique > what's your opinion?

Model

Carly Victoria

Posts: 1

Saint Catharines-Niagara, Ontario, Canada

I am working at making my portfolio strong and solid one, so I am seeking some constructive criticism about it.

Which photo do you think is strong and which do you think is not? Please be specific with why you made your choices.

Thank you!

Mar 02 15 09:04 pm Link

Photographer

dd photography

Posts: 944

San Diego, California, US

You have some very elegant, sophisticated, beautiful images where you look like you know what you are doing.

And you have many (too many) they are are just the opposite.

These are lovely:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150208/21/54d844a4cc213_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37799590

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37993967

These are just awful, for you.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140728/14/53d6c587e499f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140728/14/53d6c5694a6f7_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38078600

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140827/17/53fe7deb71e9d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140827/18/53fe7f6717dd7_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37783143

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37783207

Mar 02 15 09:20 pm Link

Photographer

Doug Bolton Photography

Posts: 784

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

These stay:

They're your strongest images and show your femininity, your beautiful curves and that you can emote passion and emotion  in your poses.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36788237 +18

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38027054  +18

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37993967  +18

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37782919 +18

Burn the  rest....

... if you'd care for a more non-public, in-depth critique, drop me a message...

Mar 02 15 09:42 pm Link

Photographer

DespayreFX

Posts: 1481

Delta, British Columbia, Canada

Lose:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … d07f0a.jpg 18+ - Terribly unflattering

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140728/14/53d6c587e499f_m.jpg - Looks awkward, don't see how it helps your port

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140728/14/53d6c5694a6f7_m.jpg - Not flattering, even it was a better picture, again, not sure that it shows anything interesting for your port

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … a41041.jpg 18+ - Your least flatteriing nude by far.

Keep:
https://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37931649 18+ - Sexy as F.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 49c99e.jpg 18+ -  a new angle, and you look very good

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … af2f85.jpg 18+ - It's not perfect (the angle makes your leg look disproportionately long), but I like it, and who doesn't love a decent outdoor nude, so it gets the nod! smile

Mar 02 15 10:38 pm Link