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Photographer

Joseph Kaminski

Posts: 23

Harrison, New York, US

The last 15 images are the new additions to my port would love to hear some feedback on my imagery. I have taken the winter to teach myself some new stuff from really developing a new natty light shooting strategy to my post work retouching. 

Thanks in advance!

Mar 28 15 09:00 pm Link

Photographer

LightTap

Posts: 14

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Best thing I can say to you id PICK THE BEST SHOT from each session, cut it down, TO ONE. I know its hard, but do as I say and maybe not even as I do. BUT... you have a lot from the same models.

1.) #4 is a better edit of #1
2.) https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150328/20/5517725789160_m.jpg  : get rid of this- dont know why- but it looks.. awkward in a lot of things.

3.) https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150328/20/55177058c5bd0_m.jpg  :if I were the model Id say I look better here and to get rid of  https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150328/20/551770c196f85_m.jpg    :As this look like dead eye and flap jack boobs.. (*I'M a woman and these are my personal thoughts).

4.) use more models

5.) use the BEST ONE shot from each shoot and use that for your images ONLY

6.) https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150328/20/55176f5a7c4e9_m.jpg  :Awkward, I think it his hands... yes it is, get rid of it. OR- CROP it!

7.) https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140612/19/539a60e6d1e4c_m.jpg   and this gem:    https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150328/20/55176fd903bb3_m.jpg are the same image but different edits, pick one. Get rid of the other.

these are my thoughts thanks for asking!!!

Mar 28 15 11:02 pm Link