Forums > Critique > CC on a self portrait - GOT poster style attempt

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David Born

Posts: 1167

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Learning Lightroom, did some of the post in Pshop, simple window lighting with one reflector, a timer and a tripod.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 2#38293426

The Game of Thrones poster style I was attempting:
https://telestrekoza.com/wp-content/upl … Poster.jpg



Thanks!

Apr 03 15 03:00 pm Link

Photographer

DespayreFX

Posts: 1481

Delta, British Columbia, Canada

wrong link?
I think you meant this one?

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150403/14/551f035ca9dd9_m.jpg

Not a bad effort. smile

Apr 03 15 04:50 pm Link

Photographer

David Born

Posts: 1167

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Thanks, I'm new at this smile

Apr 06 15 11:08 am Link

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David Kirk

Posts: 4852

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

How closely were you trying to replicate that image?

Apr 06 15 06:47 pm Link

Photographer

Eyesso

Posts: 1218

Orlando, Florida, US

Cool....I like it, it has kind of a 3D quality as an Avatar. 

Enlarged, it's a little soft on focus.  I'm no expert, but here's what I would do to it....

- Move "white" off to the right to kind of add to lightness of it.
- Pull back on "highlights" a little bit to reduce the peaking
- either sharpen it or boost the clarity a little   
- reduce the contrast a tad....to keep the shadows a little more neutral.  Or maybe just move "shadows" around.
- Then increase the "black" a little to keep black black.
- on a duplicate image....mess around with the manual "curves" and see what comes of it.  Sometimes diving into a color channel can create some interesting tonal effects.

Apr 06 15 08:40 pm Link

Photographer

David Born

Posts: 1167

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

David Kirk wrote:
How closely were you trying to replicate that image?

Not too closely, was just trying to learn more post lighting tricks and force myself to learn Lightroom.

Mine has too much orange, the blue is too purple, the focus isn't sharp enough, and I needed more dirt.

Apr 07 15 10:25 am Link