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Model

Sel-lioness

Posts: 2

London, England, United Kingdom

hello and happy Easter weekend all who read.
I'm a new model and I need to select 5 pics from my portfolio for a zcard next week. I'm having trouble choosing which ones are up to it.
1. I know I look moody on all my pics... I'm actually working in being comfortable with smiling in photos. (I have a dimple that hides most of the time.
2. I know I only have 9 pics atm (I will be doing some more shoots to keep building up my port.... but for now this is what I have and it'l have to do.

Would appreciate the feedback

https://www.modelmayhem.com/sel-lioness

Apr 04 15 04:08 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150302/10/54f4acfb9ede3_m.jpg
One of the photos on the back
[Your eyes lack detail, hair by models right ear also lacks detail]

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150302/10/54f4ae5b9aeca_m.jpg
Front side photo
[Models right arm too straight, hand looks like a claw, model lacks expression, and do you notice how dark your neck is?]

Just a side note, when sitting on a bench or chair do not fully seat yourself, do you see how the bench is distorting the shape of your upper right leg? Things you can do, place some padding under models left side to raise your bottom up, make sure camera cannot see the padding. Or sit forward, on left cheek so right side can free float without distorting upper leg.

These are just ok photos, I would hesitate to recommend using them for your Zed Card

I wish you well

Apr 04 15 05:28 am Link

Model

Sel-lioness

Posts: 2

London, England, United Kingdom

Thank you for your critique.

Apr 05 15 09:31 am Link