Hey everyone! I'm looking for some critiques on my portfolio on here. Please be honest! Also if anyone has any resources on anything that's critiqued that I could read or watch that you think would be beneficial please let me know! Thank you all for your time and have fun ripping me apart

Ok, before we begin, I would prefer to see only one photo in each slot, on with the critique.


[Wish you would have photographed this in a serious way, but here are my thoughts]
Do you see how her eyes are open only a small amount, think if camera were raised and she was flashing a full on gaze with her baby blues! Looking up the nose with the camera is not the most flattering of angles

[Bottom image critique]

Hand off face, she can check her cheek latter, move elbows away from body, will have a slimming effect on upper arm. Model quite square to camera, think dynamic and place hips on angle to camera.
Light a bit high, nose shadow touching upper lip.