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Photographer

CraigJohnston

Posts: 18

Boston, Massachusetts, US

I put some new photos on my profile would love people to take a look
included a couple shots from a shoot with former Interpol Bassist Carlos Dengler
he sure is a sharp dresser

friend me and leave comments please

Jun 16 15 09:37 am Link

Photographer

Thomas Van Dyke

Posts: 3233

Washington, District of Columbia, US

This reportage style emotes a strong narrative...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150606/12/55734eae7b643.jpg

Tandem rising diagonals work well as compositional elements... 


Wide glass distorts for an intriguing effect here...
Crisp sparkle in the eye adds to the charismatic appeal...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150606/12/55734b04e8620.jpg

Color harmonies in Carlos Dengler's profile portrait are superb, albeit sadly it is a fail owing to want of an iris...  cornea dominates...  This is a critical flaw since the eye is the first thing viewer is drawn to...


That said, this one works... once again reportage with compelling narrative... poignant synergy latent within...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150606/12/55734ab509ea6.jpg

however the whippet steals the show.... lol

Food for thought... the watermarks add nothing to the narratives and only serve as a distraction...
might rethink placing branding on your images...

thank you for sharing....

Jun 16 15 08:35 pm Link

Photographer

CraigJohnston

Posts: 18

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Thank You for the compliments and comments, I actually feel the same way about the watermarks. Shortly after this shoot I stopped using them. They serve no purpose.. I appreciate all the feed back.

Sep 02 15 09:50 am Link

Photographer

MIDNIGHT EXPRESS

Posts: 579

Pomona, California, US

You do good work, keep it up

Sep 02 15 01:37 pm Link