any comments?  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38884444   
reminds me of Audrey Hepburn

over-shopped skin

The image has a very good tonal range. But I agree with the person above me, fake looking skin makes me just flip the page. Do it again with out the shop nonsense and it would be a very nice image.

The cheek has too much skin treatment.  If you are going for that look you need to get the eyes, edge of the nose and jawline.  Nice expression and b&W though

Agree, I wish she had more natural appearing skin, you might want to Photoshop out the stray hair by models right ear, you could also get rid of the bulge at the back of her dress

Over all I think the capture is great!

I wish you well