Photographer
ShiggidyShaq Photos
Posts: 32
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
on a 1-10 scale rate my image and any addition commentary will be much appreciated will return all critiques
Photographer
JLC Images
Posts: 11615
Phillipsburg, New Jersey, US
I like the image in general, the colors and the models expression. Not sure what this does for you as an avatar. I think it should give you a general idea of what you shoot and this doesnt. If I was a model I am not sure if I would want a picture of part of my face.
-I think this picture would benefit from a tighter crop and remove the white thing near his face. Looks like he is about to be hit in the face with a baseball. As a picture I would give it a 7, but as an avatar a 3.
Photographer
ShiggidyShaq Photos
Posts: 32
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
ShiggidyShaq Photos wrote:
thanks appreciate the feedback, and its only my avatar while i am getting feedback for easier access to the photo
Photographer
ShiggidyShaq Photos
Posts: 32
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
JLC Images wrote:
I like the image in general, the colors and the models expression. Not sure what this does for you as an avatar. I think it should give you a general idea of what you shoot and this doesnt. If I was a model I am not sure if I would want a picture of part of my face.
-I think this picture would benefit from a tighter crop and remove the white thing near his face. Looks like he is about to be hit in the face with a baseball. As a picture I would give it a 7, but as an avatar a 3. Your avatar I give it 9, and nice port i love the folklore appeal and consistency
Artist/Painter
Art Hermetic
Posts: 302
Leeds, England, United Kingdom
3.
Visually, an avatar needs to engage the eyes of the viewer. As this looks away, it makes me glance over it. In close up, I like the image, but not as an avatar; and yes, the white blur is hugely distracting.
Photographer
Images by MR
Posts: 8908
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
3 and a  face
Photographer
ShiggidyShaq Photos
Posts: 32
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
Art Hermetic wrote:
3.
Visually, an avatar needs to engage the eyes of the viewer. As this looks away, it makes me glance over it. In close up, I like the image, but not as an avatar; and yes, the white blur is hugely distracting. thanks!
8.5 I like the embracing emotion your avatar invokes has a strong harmony feel and your drawling and painting album was dope!
Photographer
ShiggidyShaq Photos
Posts: 32
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
Images by MR wrote:
3 and a face Thanks!
8. your avatar has nice composition and lighting, also nice piece of the girl laying in the water in your port was awesome and colorful
Photographer
F O R B E S
Posts: 576
New York, New York, US
Doesn't really do anything for me. I'd give it a 4. It comes off as very dull. It doesn't invite me to look at your profile. I'd use something else if i were you.
Best wishes.
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