Kris Krieg wrote:
You appear to be creative with your poses. There seems to be variation and thought given with the poses. I would say your expressions need to be more dynamic. Although your expressions aren't identical, there doesn't seem to be much emotion.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … de49_m.jpg
In this shot, I would have liked to have seen a more euphoric expression. Instead you look a bit concerned.

]http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150830/15/55e38a15cf4ba_m.jpg
This photograph has a more thoughtful expression, but you look on the verge of being irritated.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 7149_m.jpg
This is my favorite photo in your portfolio. You are connecting well by looking directly at the camera, but I think the connection could have been stronger as you take this rather submissive pose. If it were a passive expression, the viewer might feel guilt or shame. Or if you expression had been more of aggression and power, the viewer might think 'although she is below me, she may attack at any moment.'

Otherwise, very artistic portfolio. Keep charging forward.

Thanks for your critique. I have a hard time pulling expressions. RBF is a pain.