If you can please look at my work and tell me what you think. I could use the help

Thank you

Your studio shots are by far your best
1. is that a photoshopped lens flare?  not crazy about her pose
2. if he had not been making a silly face, he has a great face for shooting
3. well done, if model has belly jewellery, make sure it is displayed properly
4. very nice, why no face?
5. cool shot, i am on the fence with it, oddly I think the fx are too realistic
6, 7, 8, outdoor poses are maybe not your forte, Outdoors either the model is an effect on the landscape or she is the landscape.  These are more like, hey stand there for a sec, got it
9. try cropping your 8x10 so that the back of her head, even a little in, on the left side is the edge of shot, then bring up bottom to keep aspect
10. what the hell is he doing with his face?
11. old timey pic, could have done so much with it except he has bright purple sparkly earrings in
12. cool, she should have done her nails but still cool
13. posing man, posing.  graffiti wall, rough, tough, make her dangerous, make her suit, angry, street view, not bored looking pretty girl squatting
14. crop her, 8x10, right side of hair, maybe even in a bit
15. the phrase "Ok darlin, squat here" needs to be surgically removed from you