photographedbyJonArthur wrote:
Portfolio Critique

An iconic editorial fashion narrative... classic pose dynamic... wonderful synergy latent within...

photographedbyJonArthur wrote:
Any suggestions on my portfolio?

Your Mayhem book is at best rather tacky glamour... the only image of merit is the above mentioned...

That said, you have within the ability to create narratives of merit as portrayed in your commercial web site Portraiture Project... Would strongly suggest you confine your focus to the aforementioned and leave tacky glamour to Mayhem hobbyist low life...

All the best on your journey...