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Bts

Posts: 219

Tottenham, Ontario, Canada

I recently did a shoot some new photos are in my +18 album, I am wanting to make room to add more of my new photos but not sure what to keep or rid within all albums

also feed back on my new photos +18 is great also

Jan 14 16 07:55 am Link

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Kris Krieg

Posts: 1341

Missoula, Montana, US

Brandi,

Here are some general thoughts. Of the shots with your red hair and face turned away, my favorite is this shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39718830  18+. I think the two shots of you sitting in the chair are a little off. One is overexposed and your pose in the other seems a little clunky.

Of these two shots, I think you could remove the first and keep the second (the one with the black rose). They seem a little too similar and the black rose photo has more of a storyline to it.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150522/17/555fcabea639b_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150522/17/555fcb570d5e7_m.jpg

Of these two shots, I'd keep the photo of you standing. You look more relaxed and at ease, plus the way you are playing with your dress feels more light hearted. The sitting shot feels a bit contrived.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150629/10/55917dacc7871_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150522/17/555fcdb7f369b_m.jpg

I like the potential of this shot of you laying on the bed, but I find the crop of your arm and the angle to be uncomfortable. You might consider some other shots from this scene/shoot.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39969859 18+

Hope this helps.

Jan 15 16 07:20 pm Link