DMiszczakPhotos wrote:
...give a reason for the critique they give...

Motivational element latent within this critique? To generate a viable revenue stream...

From your BIO

DMiszczakPhotos wrote:
Publications:
Wildheart magazine- Beauty and Colour issue- inside back cover

NW Creative Arts magazine- Black and White issue- feature

In our industry Tear Sheets trump everything... period! 
Might consider adding these to your portfolio

Second issue: Why don't you have a commercial web portal?

As for your recent work?



Excellent illumination, albeit cropping leaves something to be desired...
Canon's 17-50mm would not have been a first choice here... at least you were using a Canon EOS 60D (small-sensor) toward this zoom's long end thus making it a 77mm full frame equivalent here...
Headshots typically are done with at least 85mm to 135mm... many prefer even longer focal lengths for a myriad of reasons... 

btw, Headshots, especially Corporate Headshots are a stellar source of revenue...
Would strongly encourage you to move in that direction in as Vancouver is a major market for the aforementioned...

Hope this helps...
Thank you for sharing...