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Photographer

SavageBeautyPortraits

Posts: 82

Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand

Time for a cull...which image/s should go?

Jun 08 16 02:04 pm Link

Photographer

Howard Tarragon

Posts: 673

New York, New York, US

This one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150116/14/54b989fb8b8a0_m.jpg

Looks like a snapshot next to your other work...and that logo!! Also the horn ornaments and the glasses clash and why is she behind a bush...with her purse?

Jun 12 16 01:46 pm Link

Photographer

SavageBeautyPortraits

Posts: 82

Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand

Howard Tarragon wrote:
This one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150116/14/54b989fb8b8a0_m.jpg

Looks like a snapshot next to your other work...and that logo!! Also the horn ornaments and the glasses clash and why is she behind a bush...with her purse?

Thanks very much...she has gone! smile

Jun 12 16 07:07 pm Link

Photographer

Kris Krieg

Posts: 1341

Missoula, Montana, US

Hmmm, I rather like the above image you removed. However, I think this shot is not living up to it's potential. I find the desaturated treatment unappealing. It could be improved, but the theme isn't as strong as your other work.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150116/14/54b98a2991b87_m.jpg

I rather like this image, but I'm not a fan of the desaturated Instagramy treatment. Might be worthy of a second look in post. It does seem out of character compared to your other work which have darker story lines and richer visuals.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160503/16/57293534b2652_m.jpg

By the way, this is freakin' awesome!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160601/13/574f471393a19_m.jpg

Jun 12 16 07:37 pm Link

Photographer

SavageBeautyPortraits

Posts: 82

Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand

Kris Krieg wrote:
Hmmm, I rather like the above image you removed. However, I think this shot is not living up to it's potential. I find the desaturated treatment unappealing.

Thanks for that yes I will remove that one...it is a relatively old image smile

Jun 13 16 02:56 pm Link