Forums > Critique > Which photos should I keep/ which should I remove?

Model

Serena Violet

Posts: 2

San Francisco, California, US

Which photos do you like, which do you not? Feel free to give any kind of feedback!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/3943869/viewall

Jun 17 16 11:47 am Link

Photographer

roger alan

Posts: 1192

Anderson, Indiana, US

love this one

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160617/11/5764410e61f19_m.jpg

EDIT: I agree with all of Ferria's comments in the next post

Jun 17 16 05:50 pm Link

Jun 18 16 12:19 pm Link

Photographer

Howard Tarragon

Posts: 673

New York, New York, US

Let me say this first. You have a beautiful face so choosing bad photos is made difficult because one see your face and tends to ignore photo flaws.

1. This is lovely. beautiful expression, interesting pose, nice light.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/14/57573f3d7d8df_m.jpg

2. Nice smile, ok pose but dark headboard line going through your head, 3 different skin tones (face, arms, legs), blemishes on back leg.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/14/57573dd1258b8_m.jpg

3. No. You are too small in the frame, Too much vegetation and I don't get a narrative here.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/14/57573f66b916d_m.jpg

4. Same problems as #2 plus distracting bracelet
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/14/57573f28bba3a_m.jpg

5. Just lovely
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/14/57573f4788465_m.jpg

6. You're gorgeous but there's no way to fix all of the technical errors in the shot (busy background, hotspot near your shoe, on car, etc etc
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/14/57573f51d9f45_m.jpg

7. Nice but could have been better-the lighting is harsh
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160617/14/57646db78830b_m.jpg

8. Nice - light is off color. Other minor flaws could be fixed.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160617/11/576441de45df4_m.jpg

9. Dress is overexposed, too much contrast almost obliterating your eyes. Tree branches growing into your head. Lovely smile. Remember to relax your shoulders.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/14/57573f5c0385a_m.jpg

10. Lovely, dynamic pose.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160617/11/5764410e61f19_m.jpg

11. Nope, bad snapshot.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160615/15/5761d25130ae2_m.jpg

12. Great pose and smile but skin blemishes on forehead need to be processed out.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160615/15/5761d759e6ae8_m.jpg

With different photographers you could see major improvements on your photos.

All the best and have fun!

Jun 19 16 09:01 am Link