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Photographer

JetSet Image

Posts: 6

New York, New York, US

Why not...provided you are still handing them out.

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Jun 26 16 07:45 am Link

Photographer

roger alan

Posts: 1192

Anderson, Indiana, US

Thanks for looking through my port. Your points are valid and well received smile

Jun 26 16 01:21 pm Link

Model

Jen B E

Posts: 213

Hesperia, California, US

Timothy Bell wrote:

This port definitely shows you off better than the other. You have a number of notable features but I still like your shoulders the best. The image linked below is amazing and almost had me change my mind to your stomach. 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40708558

Oh awesome and thank you!

I'm looking forward to adding more to both ports soon.

Jen

Jun 26 16 07:49 pm Link

Photographer

Timothy Bell

Posts: 472

North Richland Hills, Texas, US

Cinema Photography wrote:
Have a go at my port. Reading your list, I figure You should have a look and give me the breakdown that your time allows for, so be a thorough as ya like smile

I find your port very interesting, the Classic Art Inspired album is spot on and absolutely feels like it sounds.

This one is divine 18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35377408

I'm also a big fan of Pinup and Vintage styles.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101118/12/4ce58dc5ad93b_m.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121015/20/507cd07a3d129_m.jpg

Your "modern" album I think is misnamed as it looks very 70s inspired
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140203/18/52f0573e3d5a8_m.jpg

There are a few misses in your port as well.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160413/11/570e8e73e76c1_m.jpg

The other of her is much better, this one is kinda boring.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120123/14/4f1de3d59965d_m.jpg

Jun 26 16 09:54 pm Link

Photographer

Timothy Bell

Posts: 472

North Richland Hills, Texas, US

JetSet Image wrote:
Why not...provided you are still handing them out.

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Your Best:

Because good light makes good photographs. I like the warmth, the colors, and the slight smile.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/13/57572d743e3c1_m.jpg

Your Worst:

Flat light, eyes look to be closing, the right arm is in an odd position, and not the best choice on filters in my opinion.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160607/14/5757380044026_m.jpg

Jun 26 16 10:14 pm Link

Photographer

JetSet Image

Posts: 6

New York, New York, US

Thank you for the look and critique!

Jun 27 16 07:37 am Link

Photographer

Cinema Photography

Posts: 4488

Boulder, Colorado, US

Timothy Bell wrote:

I find your port very interesting, the Classic Art Inspired album is spot on and absolutely feels like it sounds.

This one is divine 18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35377408

I'm also a big fan of Pinup and Vintage styles.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101118/12/4ce58dc5ad93b_m.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121015/20/507cd07a3d129_m.jpg

Your "modern" album I think is misnamed as it looks very 70s inspired
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140203/18/52f0573e3d5a8_m.jpg

There are a few misses in your port as well.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160413/11/570e8e73e76c1_m.jpg

The other of her is much better, this one is kinda boring.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120123/14/4f1de3d59965d_m.jpg

Thanks for having a look and the very kind words.  70s inspired is pretty spot on. The whole series I did was meant to evoke memories of a sort, havent posted a bunch of the shoots but it was a really fun concept to do.

Again, thanks for taking time out! Cheers,

Jun 27 16 01:34 pm Link

Model

Cecilia Or

Posts: 227

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

If I choose (C) Read the comments to see if you agree/disagree with the OP, may I ask if I still qualify for receiving your feedback?
I would love to hear your opinion. I am interested in (1) best & worst photos and if possible also (4) best feature.
Thank you very much. Have a smiling day.

Jun 29 16 01:13 pm Link

Photographer

Timothy Bell

Posts: 472

North Richland Hills, Texas, US

Cecilia Or wrote:
If I choose (C) Read the comments to see if you agree/disagree with the OP, may I ask if I still qualify for receiving your feedback?
I would love to hear your opinion. I am interested in (1) best & worst photos and if possible also (4) best feature.
Thank you very much. Have a smiling day.

Your Best:
I think this is the best image in your MM port, most of your images look like just a model posing for pictures...this image feels like there is a story behind it.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111025/15/4ea739636841b_m.jpg

Your Worst:
I see this as the worst in your MM port, the image is unbalanced, your right arm looks awkward, your left arm is missing, your cropped at an odd place, it just doesn't work for me.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120228/12/4f4d3e2209de1_m.jpg

Your Best Feature:
The tone in your legs in this image is very nice, I wish there were a few more images showing off your legs.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111208/14/4ee1384314553_m.jpg

Jun 29 16 10:43 pm Link