Dominique Liao wrote:
...suggestions would be highly appreciated!

Dominique your have agency stats albeit dress size 4 is a tad above 2...

Might be wise to review the New Faces, Lifestyle Women and Runway boards on Look Models to see if you might be a good fit...

Here is their submissions page...
The also have Open Calls on Mondays 2:30 to 4:00
166 Geary Street, 14th Floor
San Francisco, CA 94108
Phone: 415.781. 2822

You might be best served to contact them through [email protected]

Important!  Please carefully review the LOOK's Runway Model's Stats...
You'll quickly notice that dress size 2 or 0 is ubiquitous...
And for good reason... Designers dress forms mirror this size range...

Dominique at your height you are decidedly Runway & Catwalk material... 

As for you MM Book? Lose this image...



You have a building growing out of the top of your head... major distraction...
Kacy wasn't paying attention to compositional elements...

Left you a comment on Kacy's best rendering which is indeed rather enchanting...

Hope this helps...
All the best on your journey Dominique