Forums > Critique > Serious Critique > Critiques for this set please!

Model

Annie_Lee

Posts: 80

Binghamton, New York, US

Hello MM!

I'm trying to figure out which photos from this shoot I want to put on my MM port. I always upload every photo on my Facebook fan page, but I try to keep my port small so photographers can see the "creme of the crop" so to speak. What are your thoughts on this set? Any shots stand out (in a good or bad way)? Any improvements or suggestions you'd like to offer?

https://www.facebook.com/AnnieLeeDCX/al … 142010759/

Thank you!

Jul 06 16 04:52 pm Link

Photographer

Kris Krieg

Posts: 1341

Missoula, Montana, US

Hmmmm, I'm not in love with either set, but if I had to pick one shot from each series, it would be these two:
https://scontent-atl3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-0/c0.0.206.206/p206x206/13592787_1080774438677396_4167337497122146068_n.jpg?oh=675c6123e6630be240d8fd5cbce2921a&oe=57EBCD63https://scontent-atl3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-0/c0.0.206.206/p206x206/13615432_1080773738677466_2718566778631048133_n.jpg?oh=7891dc67baa7a203a0263e13b82254ca&oe=58325823

Wardrobe is fine. As a model, I can tell you are exploring new poses…that's good. Keep working on expressions. I really wish the red plaid jacket series had better color treatment. Your skin has a greenish hue which isn't very appealing. Fun experimental series though.

Jul 06 16 06:56 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

Why is this posted in two critique sections simultaneously?

Jul 06 16 09:30 pm Link

Model

Annie_Lee

Posts: 80

Binghamton, New York, US

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
Why is this posted in two critique sections simultaneously?

I don't know how to delete a forum post, and I also received another set of photos from a separate shoot shortly after this post was made and commented on, so I figured it would be fine to use the other post to critique both shoots since they weren't critiquing the same thing.

Jul 07 16 05:20 am Link

Model

Annie_Lee

Posts: 80

Binghamton, New York, US

Kris Krieg wrote:
Hmmmm, I'm not in love with either set, but if I had to pick one shot from each series, it would be these two:
https://scontent-atl3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-0/c0.0.206.206/p206x206/13592787_1080774438677396_4167337497122146068_n.jpg?oh=675c6123e6630be240d8fd5cbce2921a&oe=57EBCD63https://scontent-atl3-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-0/c0.0.206.206/p206x206/13615432_1080773738677466_2718566778631048133_n.jpg?oh=7891dc67baa7a203a0263e13b82254ca&oe=58325823

Wardrobe is fine. As a model, I can tell you are exploring new poses…that's good. Keep working on expressions. I really wish the red plaid jacket series had better color treatment. Your skin has a greenish hue which isn't very appealing. Fun experimental series though.

Hi Kris!

Thank you for your critique. I have been trying to experiment more and go outside of my comfort zone, so I'm glad that it's well received. smile

Jul 07 16 05:22 am Link