Hi, I just posted new photos to my album Robyn. After months of doing no photo shoots, I finally had the chance to work with a very beautiful model yesterday. I am very happy with the result despite the challenges of traveling to our locations and limited time.

Due to pose, her knees look larger than life. For me cropping off the lower part of image, just below bottom of her elbows, would create a more flattering image.


Feet please, placing the logo over her hand is very distracting, especially a red distracting logo. Lower shoulders, as with this pose she appears to have lost her neck.


Think long lovely fingers, not a fist [Models right hand] a nice bouquet would go a long way in adding a finishing touch to the image. For me hitting the camera with the white of the models eye is not a positive element.


The eyes seem a bit out of focus, would also like to see a tighter crop of photo left, just to the right of the camera logo.
Pose wise would like to see models left shoulder lowered, and move behind her more.


This for me is the strongest photo of the set, would really like to se a tighter crop on photos left side, about halfway, between models right hand and left photo border.

I wish you well