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Oct 03 16 02:31 am Link

Photographer

Risen Phoenix Photo

Posts: 3779

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

So you are not in China as your profile says you are in Perth AUS.  Ok just wondering why you don't shoot Chinese models I have shot some amazing Chinese, Vietnamese and Hmong models they are all so beautiful.

These nudes are ok.  You did fine for you first set. I would give them a C.  However they lack a certain style or personality.  Seems like you took them just to say you took nudes. The model has a nice body but is posing by rote as if she feels nothing. It's lackluster.  And then your photography is much the same.

The image in your port with the  color shots of blood running down from mouth to chin, you should take down. It screams Amatuer.

I think you need to think through your nude shoots on what you want to accomplish and what is the most creative way to bring that about.

Oct 03 16 02:48 am Link

Model

Magda Kulpinska

Posts: 688

Paris, Île-de-France, France

I like the grain and her legs but I have an issue with fake breasts on this type of nude....

Oct 03 16 03:31 am Link

Photographer

Han He

Posts: 11

Beijing, Beijing, China

Risen Phoenix Photo wrote:
So you are not in China as your profile says you are in Perth AUS.  Ok just wondering why you don't shoot Chinese models I have shot some amazing Chinese, Vietnamese and Hmong models they are all so beautiful.

These nudes are ok.  You did fine for you first set. I would give them a C.  However they lack a certain style or personality.  Seems like you took them just to say you took nudes. The model has a nice body but is posing by rote as if she feels nothing. It's lackluster.  And then your photography is much the same.

The image in your port with the  color shots of blood running down from mouth to chin, you should take down. It screams Amatuer.

I think you need to think through your nude shoots on what you want to accomplish and what is the most creative way to bring that about.

I went to Perth for a holiday and arranged the shoot and thanks for your advices

Oct 03 16 03:35 am Link

Photographer

Han He

Posts: 11

Beijing, Beijing, China

Magda Kulpinska wrote:
I like the grain and her legs but I have an issue with fake breasts on this type of nude....

I am afraid the fake breasts thing is totally beyond my control...

Oct 03 16 03:36 am Link

Photographer

P R E S T O N

Posts: 2602

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Magda Kulpinska wrote:
I like the grain and her legs but I have an issue with fake breasts on this type of nude....

I don't mind fake breasts so long as they look natural. I too have an issue with the 'fake breast look' though.

Han He wrote:
I am afraid the fake breasts thing is totally beyond my control...

Really? Are you not able to choose the models you work with?

Oct 03 16 05:00 am Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11727

Olney, Maryland, US

OP left the building within the last three hours.

Edit:

Magda Kulpinska wrote:
I like the grain and her legs but I have an issue with fake breasts on this type of nude....

K I M I L Y wrote:
I don't mind fake breasts so long as they look natural. I too have an issue with the 'fake breast look' though.

Han He wrote:
I am afraid the fake breasts thing is totally beyond my control...

K I M I L Y wrote:
Really? Are you not able to choose the models you work with?

Apparently the model is his wife!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/forums/post/962418

Oct 03 16 06:05 am Link

Photographer

P R E S T O N

Posts: 2602

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Mark Salo wrote:
OP left the building within the last three hours.

Apparently the model is his wife!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/forums/post/962418

You can't blame me - Magda said it first!
smile

Oct 03 16 07:52 am Link

Photographer

Risen Phoenix Photo

Posts: 3779

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

So this is the second time this individual just up and walked off this site.  Not sure what his motivation is but I tend to agree with others he is a troll.

Oct 04 16 12:27 am Link

Model

Magda Kulpinska

Posts: 688

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Well, of course you can choose the models your work with. If she's his wife then what he says makes sense though.

Yes I think you can shoot nudes with models that have implants and it won't show but in this shoot it was very very obvious.

He left? Aha. You got those every now and then.

Oct 04 16 12:54 am Link

Photographer

FFantastique

Posts: 2535

Orlando, Florida, US

Han He wrote:
Those content goes to 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41330975
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41330963
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41330879
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41330878

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Oct 04 16 04:54 am Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11727

Olney, Maryland, US

Risen Phoenix Photo wrote:
So this is the second time this individual just up and walked off this site.  Not sure what his motivation is but I tend to agree with others he is a troll.

Interesting.

Oct 04 16 06:52 am Link

Photographer

FFantastique

Posts: 2535

Orlando, Florida, US

Maybe he has censorship in his country that we don't have.

Oct 04 16 07:01 am Link

Photographer

Risen Phoenix Photo

Posts: 3779

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

FFantastique wrote:
Maybe he has censorship in his country that we don't have.

He is living in AUS. No matter what his profile says.

Oct 05 16 12:25 am Link