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Photographer

the_w_photography

Posts: 73

Ann Arbor, Michigan, US

In my 2nd year shooting and wanted to share this from a recent shoot. Would like feedback good, bad and the ugly. Thanks in advance...

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41681267

Dec 19 16 11:37 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

For me the photo seems faded, wish all of models left foot were in the photo.

Were you using fill flash?

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I wish you well

Dec 19 16 02:21 pm Link

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sweet gamine

Posts: 475

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

While I like the colour treatment, yes, that missing foot is a bit problematic. The model's left arm is fine as enough of it is included to see where it is leading. Not so with the right arm; it appears amputated at the elbow. Having the model drape her arm along the chair may be a better option with this angle.

Dec 19 16 02:40 pm Link

Photographer

the_w_photography

Posts: 73

Ann Arbor, Michigan, US

No fill flash, just 100$ avail window light. Yes, the fade was the look I was going for. Got ya on the left foot, rookie mistake! Thanks for commenting!




Lee_Photography wrote:
For me the photo seems faded, wish all of models left foot were in the photo.

Were you using fill flash?

Merry Christmas!
I wish you well

Dec 20 16 06:06 am Link

Photographer

the_w_photography

Posts: 73

Ann Arbor, Michigan, US

Thanks, I see that right arm issue now! Ughhh Point taken!

sweet gamine wrote:
While I like the colour treatment, yes, that missing foot is a bit problematic. The model's left arm is fine as enough of it is included to see where it is leading. Not so with the right arm; it appears amputated at the elbow. Having the model drape her arm along the chair may be a better option with this angle.

Dec 20 16 06:07 am Link