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Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Hi everyone,
Recently I found myself in a rut with my work.  I became too robotic at it.  Decided to do a TF shoot yesterday and just have fun with it.  Gonna do a few more for my own sake.  Anyway, let me know what you think of these and if any are port worthy.  Thanks!

NUMBER 1
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_4504-Edit%20Internet_zpshqlasls7.png

NUMBER 2
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_4517-Edit%20Internet_zpsrnilu7ou.png

NUMBER 3
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_4533-Edit%20Internet_zpssiyjca77.png

NUMBER 4
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_4551-Edit%20Internet_zpsc1pwluio.png

NUMBER 5
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_4586-Edit%20Internet_zpsm99zbqom.png

NUMBER 6
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_4593-Edit%20Internet_zpskka2ceqi.png

NUMBER 7
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_4488-EditInternet_zpsousojvah.png

Apr 16 17 10:14 pm Link

Photographer

Eyesso

Posts: 1218

Orlando, Florida, US

The last 3 are better than the first 3, but #6 is the winner!

Apr 17 17 01:02 pm Link

Digital Artist

AbbeyMarie

Posts: 71

San Antonio, Texas, US

6 is the strongest and I quite like it, I'd call it port worthy.

3 is the weakest of the bunch, but 1 and 2 also feel stiff  and a bit forced.

Apr 17 17 03:31 pm Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Eyesso wrote:
The last 3 are better than the first 3, but #6 is the winner!

Thank you!

Apr 17 17 07:10 pm Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

AbbeyMarie wrote:
6 is the strongest and I quite like it, I'd call it port worthy.

3 is the weakest of the bunch, but 1 and 2 also feel stiff  and a bit forced.

Thanks!  I ended up adding one more cause my friends pushed me to lol.

Apr 17 17 07:10 pm Link