ivanoff wrote:

Looks good!, (Personal preference) I would remove the single hair sticking (camera right) and maybe lighten the shadow by the nose and chin. Good job, I like how you preserved the skin texture! Thank you for posting!

Mark Saprykin wrote:

This goes with your type of retouching well. You really did a good job cleaning this up, but the skin looks a little too smooth too me personally (the image is a bit small to really look over thoroughly. I would have liked to see it with the original texture preserved. Good job and thank you for posting!

Leighsphotos wrote:

This image is a bit small to give a really thorough  look,  but I see good skin texture and like the overall retouch. The flyaway hair sticking out behind the neck would be better off removed. Good job so far!

AlmasMUA wrote:

From what I can tell this is a great retouch! The image is a bit small to do a thorough inspection, but from what I can see it looks great! Maybe her hair line could be cleaned up a bit (personal preference).

natalia_kaszuba wrote:
Hello and thanks for sharing


full res: https://ibb.co/hsDEqk

Good job! Thanks for linking a High Res version, so I can more closely inspect it as well. The only options I have for you (which are personal preference) would be to lighten the shadow under the lip and nose a bit. Also, I would maybe smooth out the skin around the nostrils a bit (but not completely remove the texture)

beoriginalphotoediting wrote:

Gorgeous and creative! Only thing I would consider is maybe straightening out the bend in the sequin choker (camera left, personal preference) a little.

trantienvuong wrote:
Can I use this image outside MM?

From what I can tell, this is a good clean retouch! I can't see everything though, due to the small size of the image. Take note of what I said to the previous poster of this image for other options to consider.

Jeronimo Tapia wrote:
Hi, Comments and criticism

Overall this is a good clean retouch, and perserved the models features. I would dodge and burn the iris, to bring out more color. I would also make the shoulder (camera-right) more of a diagonal line, so it looks closer to the one one the right, and a little less broad. (All personal preferences)

Leonardo Garcia wrote:
Thanks for your post Albertus, critique when possible.
High Res - https://ibb.co/ddzdkk
Leonardo

Good clean retouch! I like the background swap. Only, thing I can think of as an option to consider (but not necessary), would be to sharpen the jewelry a little more (only the jewelry). Looks fine as is though!

Andrey Bautin wrote:
Tried to get a bit more stylized look. All images are clickable.

Wow, I don't know what to say, you gave these images a different feel, very creative, dramatic, eye-catching, and highly detailed.

vcebuk wrote:

Good job! Right now all I notice, is a black spot on the eye (camera right). Also, maybe try filling the hair gaps in on the back of the head where you can see the backdrop showing through (personal preference).

Alevo wrote:

Clean retouch, I just noticed the line on the skin between the eye brows. Maybe consider warping the hair on the back of the neck (so the line flows better), and filling in the spots where you can see the backdrop through it.

kundan wrote:

Here is my edit. Would like to hear your thoughts on this.
Full Res @: https://ibb.co/e9tswQ

Kundanb87 wrote:
Here is my edit. Would like to hear your thoughts on this.
Full Res @: https://ibb.co/e9tswQ

Overall a good job! I see a few skin imperfection you missed here and there, also there is a line across the neck that you might consider removing. Maybe, clean the hair fly away a little more.

yasminewriter wrote:
Here is my try

A decent try, but this one appear to still need a good amount of work. The hair needs attention (I can see where you were working on it on the backdrop), the skin also needs attention (I can see spots where you left patches from working on it), there are lines still on the neck, the nasal fold needs to be softened. The skin is noticeably splotchy in places and red. I would also, check out some of the previous feedback, I gave others so you can make sure you see every possibility (I mentioned so far). That's all I can think of for now, thanks for your try!

StarOver wrote:


these are my retouch result,Can i know your thoughts?

These both still could use a lot of work: skin lines, hair, etc. Please refer to the recommendations I made to others who previously posted these two images.

Eugene27 wrote:

Overall a good retouch. I would fill in the large hole in the hair (where you can see the backdrop through) and maybe clean the fly aways there. The skin around the nostrils is a bit rough looking also.You may also want to clean up the hair line around the forehead (personal preference).

Shishova Olga wrote:
Hello!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/gpg911l73agkd … 6.jpg?dl=0

Good job not missing any skin imperfections. The fly aways and hair line need attention. Other then that, if the skin works for your preference then you're good.

This is not really my style, imo the combination of smooth skin and flattened out lighting makes it look a too much like a digital drawing. I think it is important to leave a hint of the natural facial contouring around the nasal folds. Even though this is about retouching you don't want someone to look at your finished product and scream photoshopped (even though now a days everyone seems to have access to some form of it like snapchat filters etc.).

VictoriaMLK wrote:

Good work! I can definitely see the skin texture preserved. I would soften the pores along the nasal folds. Also, the few hairs crossing the earlobe would probably be better off completely removed or blended a bit more.