https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42320566
any input on this one would be great

Composition is not terrible, the subject uses the whole diagonal of the frame. I like that. But is too cramped, there isn't enough room to differentiate what is what you wanted to frame.

Retouching is non-existent and the highlights of the sheets are distracting.

I do like how you maintained the light on her face and part of her back, but again, those sheets are competing for attention.

I also like her skin texture.

All these are observations I'd apply if this were my photo, I have no effing clue what I'm talking about!