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Retoucher

utsav1232002

Posts: 219

Calcutta, Bangla, India

[/img]https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4380/35563842043_25181a908f_o.jpgDSC_4148a by rick chakraborty, on Flickr[img][/img]https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4413/36203976882_12e1b6cac6_o.jpgIMG_2755 by rick chakraborty, on Flickr[img][/img]https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4369/36372246555_e2e79e6450_o.jpgMXB_6942a by rick chakraborty, on Flickr[img][/img]https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4306/36126323851_aef7a5f101_o.jpgMXB_6942 by rick chakraborty, on Flickr[img][/img]https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4332/35975315310_8a8f86c217_o.jpgIMG_7875 by rick chakraborty, on Flickr[img][/img]https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4399/36327458726_7e6f978d99_o.jpg_99B3446 by rick chakraborty, on Flickr[img][/img]https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4293/35865350150_72feba74ba_o.jpgPascalLATILAnneSo44 by rick chakraborty, on Flickr[img]

these r some of my latest works....i am looking for constructive criticism and guidance..where to improve and where i need a change of perspective/approach

Aug 04 17 11:15 am Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

You suffer from plastic skin.

Good retouching is invisible. Work on that.

Best of luck!

Aug 07 17 03:39 pm Link

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Neil Kei

Posts: 3

San Francisco, California, US

^ Agree.

Maybe ~-10 to -5 on clarity?

Aug 27 17 09:18 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Looking at the first two images will assume the first image is the before and second is after.
The nose appears over expose in the first image but has not been corrected in second
In the second you have made the models right armpit wrinkles stand out even more
For me the increased shadows on the neck, which were made even darker is not a positive

A more natural appearing skin texture

I wish you well

Aug 28 17 08:44 am Link

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Varton Photography

Posts: 203

New York, New York, US

Glows on her eyes on top photo on right side gives me goosebumps. She appears like a supernatural creature.

Aug 28 17 12:48 pm Link