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Photographer

jerrysmorris

Posts: 8

Mission Viejo, California, US

hello,

just started using model Mayhem again after a long hiatus, also working on a new website for my photography would love feedback.
https://www.jbsmphotography.com

thank you,
JM

Nov 09 18 01:38 pm Link

Photographer

Shadow Dancer

Posts: 9781

Bellingham, Washington, US

I just want to say that this is the stand out photo in your port and I like it very much.
I think you should use if for your avatar and strive to create more images that deliver a similar impact.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/181010/02/5bbdc767c9eab_m.jpg

Nov 09 18 11:50 pm Link

Photographer

jerrysmorris

Posts: 8

Mission Viejo, California, US

Thank you Shadow Dancer, I appreciate your reply and I plan on taking similar photos in the future with different locations.

Nov 10 18 03:50 am Link

Photographer

Garry k

Posts: 30130

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Shadow Dancer wrote:
I just want to say that this is the stand out photo in your port and I like it very much.
I think you should use if for your avatar and strive to create more images that deliver a similar impact.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/181010/02/5bbdc767c9eab_m.jpg

Agreed

Nov 10 18 07:04 am Link

Photographer

jerrysmorris

Posts: 8

Mission Viejo, California, US

Thank you Garry K

Nov 10 18 06:40 pm Link

Photographer

Abbitt Photography

Posts: 13564

Washington, Utah, US

I love your creativity  and diversity.  I think your portfolio is better than some long timers I have seen here.  I think the question you have to ask yourself is, what the purpose of your MM portfolio is.   It’s not model centric, so it probably won’t inspire many models here to work with you.  It is however the kind of work I’d really enjoy seeing in a local art exhibition.

Nov 10 18 06:55 pm Link

Photographer

jerrysmorris

Posts: 8

Mission Viejo, California, US

Abbitt Photography wrote:
I love your creativity  and diversity.  I think your portfolio is better than some long timers I have seen here.  I think the question you have to ask yourself is, what the purpose of your MM portfolio is.   It’s not model centric, so it probably won’t inspire many models here to work with you.  It is however the kind of work I’d really enjoy seeing in a local art exhibition.

Thank you, I appreciate your input I thought I'd start using MM to collaborate with other artists and network but I agree with what you said about my work not being model centric. You've given me a lot to think about thank you.

Nov 10 18 09:29 pm Link