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Model

Pixie of light

Posts: 80

MCALLEN, Texas, US

I am running out of room in my portfolio and would love to know what I should remove and why. Thank you! smile

Nov 16 18 07:09 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 23778

Orlando, Florida, US

Lots of duplicate looks Miss C, in the first three rows, you have the same head tilt in 11 of the 12 images  .  .  .  go down each row, and keep the best image out of the four, should give you plenty of room for new looks  .  .  .

SOS

Nov 16 18 07:32 am Link

Model

Pixie of light

Posts: 80

MCALLEN, Texas, US

Ok I will do that. Thank you

Nov 16 18 10:04 am Link

Photographer

GSin Photography

Posts: 701

Carmel, Indiana, US

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/3 … #/44818919

the coolest thing in this pic is your hair and the location. feet cut off, lighting sucks and your head position is off

Nov 19 18 12:29 pm Link

Photographer

Garry k

Posts: 30130

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I am a believer of Quality over Quantity

You have a Good Look but only a few good shots

I think that you should use the following photo as the standard to meet or better with respect to your ongoing work

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44729844


Replace the weaker photos with stronger ones  as you continue with your modelling

Nov 19 18 12:50 pm Link

Photographer

Sal W Hanna

Posts: 6686

Huntington Beach, California, US

This shot is inconsistent with your ability and the quality in comparison to other shots in your portfolio.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/180927/12/5bad2a3d4348d_m.jpg
Looks completely amateurish. 
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/180830/09/5b881f06849ca_m.jpg

You have a selective color sheer shirt with blue jean set. There are 3 shots, however 1 is not as strong as the other two. Consider removing one.

Nov 19 18 08:22 pm Link