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Model

Yume Tsukura

Posts: 5

New York, New York, US

I will try my best to be honest, and that might not be something you like, but sorry... not sorry.

I don't have much experience and this isn't supposed to be taken too seriously, but if you care what I think, or are just curious what I think, please comment below and I will give you some feedback.

Maybe something I say can help you, or annoy you or both !
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Oct 18 19 07:54 am Link

Photographer

Shadow Dancer

Posts: 9782

Bellingham, Washington, US

I would like your critique, please and thank you!

Oct 18 19 09:19 am Link

Model

Yume Tsukura

Posts: 5

New York, New York, US

Shadow Dancer wrote:
I would like your critique, please and thank you!

I like the energy in the photos but sometimes I think the background could be blurry so the subject stands out more !

OMG the girl getting splashed is so crazy ! I would not like that shoot ! 🀣😘

Oct 18 19 09:27 am Link

Photographer

Shadow Dancer

Posts: 9782

Bellingham, Washington, US

Yume Tsukura wrote:

I like the energy in the photos but sometimes I think the background could be blurry so the subject stands out more !

OMG the girl getting splashed is so crazy ! I would not like that shoot ! 🀣😘

Thank you. The Splash took some planning, you only get one shot.
It turned out much better than we thought!!!! Even her hair was soaked. lol

We got the model in a heated car (towels on the seat) and to a warm place to change in another 3-4 minutes.

Oct 18 19 09:37 am Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San CristΓ³bal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Hi Yume,

I hope you make it to Los Angeles in the near future smile

Oct 18 19 09:41 am Link

Model

Yume Tsukura

Posts: 5

New York, New York, US

Shadow Dancer wrote:

Thank you. The Splash took some planning, you only get one shot.
It turned out much better than we thought!!!! Even her hair was soaked. lol

We got the model in a heated car (towels on the seat) and to a warm place to change in another 3-4 minutes.

Good to know ! LOL omg fun !

Oct 18 19 10:06 am Link

Model

Yume Tsukura

Posts: 5

New York, New York, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Hi Yume,

I hope you make it to Los Angeles in the near future smile

I love it ! Very Sexy ! I love the colors and feel of the photos, and great wardrobe and makeup. Really sexy ! Did I say sexy ?
I really love photos like this ! Clean and stylish, and .... sexy.

wish you were in NY.

I like every photo, except, guess which one..?

Oct 18 19 10:08 am Link

Photographer

TDSImages

Posts: 1022

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

I would appreciate a critique...thank you.

Oct 18 19 10:15 am Link

Model

Yume Tsukura

Posts: 5

New York, New York, US

TDSImages wrote:
I would appreciate a critique...thank you.

I love this darker images look, and colors. Its very hard to choose a favorite, but I like the fur coat and want one after looking at that photo, and I want her eyes !

Oct 18 19 10:19 am Link

Model

Randomusername

Posts: 24

Chicago, Illinois, US

I would love to hear your opinion on my stuff . I'm a newbie too

Oct 19 19 06:54 pm Link

Photographer

IMAGINERIES

Posts: 2048

New York, New York, US

If you have a lot of time or want to open just one folder and take a look......Arigatou!

Oct 20 19 05:05 am Link

Photographer

Rik Williams

Posts: 4005

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Yume Tsukura wrote:
I will try my best to be honest, and that might not be something you like, but sorry... not sorry.

I don't have much experience and this isn't supposed to be taken too seriously, but if you care what I think, or are just curious what I think, please comment below and I will give you some feedback.

Maybe something I say can help you, or annoy you or both !
πŸ˜‡πŸ˜­πŸ˜ˆ

Shoot smile



....or not wink

Oct 20 19 06:21 am Link

Photographer

SayCheeZ!

Posts: 20624

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

THE OP IS NO LONGER WITH MM

Oct 20 19 08:09 am Link