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Model

Tonia Ray

Posts: 91

Cullman, Alabama, US

I would love to hear your thoughts!
Tonia

Dec 11 06 06:02 pm Link

Model

Dances with Wolves

Posts: 25108

SHAWNEE ON DELAWARE, Pennsylvania, US

I like the job and the shot- but I wish you had done something else with it considering you were all covered in silver.

Dec 11 06 06:04 pm Link

Photographer

00siris

Posts: 19166

New York, New York, US

A lot of work but I like - A LOT !!!!
http://img1.modelmayhem.com/060126/00/43d866891300a.jpg

Dec 11 06 06:08 pm Link

Model

Fifi

Posts: 58134

Annapolis, Maryland, US

00siris wrote:
A lot of work but I like - A LOT !!!!
http://img1.modelmayhem.com/060126/00/43d866891300a.jpg

She's asking about in her port, silly...lol


Anywho.....I like the simpleness of the poses. Almost like a statue.


Edit: Oh yeah, in the second picture, watch your feet... you have to remember to pose all the way down to your feet. Your one foot looks like it's just doing its own thing. Other than that, nice shots smile

Dec 11 06 06:11 pm Link

Model

Miranda Cole

Posts: 286

Monterey, California, US

Nice images. Its clean and artistic.

Dec 11 06 06:12 pm Link

Model

Stacy

Posts: 2500

San Diego, California, US

Tonia Ray wrote:
I would love to hear your thoughts!
Tonia

thought: I want to add it to my port.

Dec 11 06 06:14 pm Link

Photographer

Dragon Lily Photo

Posts: 523

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

I liked them, any more?

Dec 11 06 06:14 pm Link

Model

Stacy

Posts: 2500

San Diego, California, US

Stacy wrote:

thought: I want to add it to my port.

oops okay. I just realized I'm in critique.. I like your pose in the first one. The second one is a bit un-natural / uncomfortable looking to me. The way the arms are positioned and so stiff in the air.

I think with the silvery body paint, a more dramatic lighting would've been nicer. But I dont know much about technical stuff, so dont take me strongly on that.

Dec 11 06 06:20 pm Link

Photographer

00siris

Posts: 19166

New York, New York, US

Lamonica wrote:
She's asking about in her port, silly...lol


Anywho.....I like the simpleness of the poses. Almost like a statue.


Edit: Oh yeah, in the second picture, watch your feet... you have to remember to pose all the way down to your feet. Your one foot looks like it's just doing its own thing. Other than that, nice shots smile

Yeah, I noticed that after

*** so embarrassed ***

sorry Tonia

Dec 11 06 07:50 pm Link