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Hi everybody! I just changed my website and need some honest feedback. https://www.amylopulissa.com Not about the pictures but about the layout, the info etc. when you are looking for a makeup artist and you see my site what are your thoughts? More or less pictures? Is it better to put my prices or not? more personal info as a person or not? or do you miss anything on my site? Love to hear from U !! xxx Amy Nov 22 19 05:02 pm Link redacted Nov 22 19 06:21 pm Link ? what do you mean Nov 23 19 04:15 am Link amelyMUA wrote: "redacted" means that Gary changed his mind and deleted his post Nov 23 19 05:38 am Link IMO, the layout is attractive, low-key and simple. Nicely laid out. In the portfolio, the second row of images could go. The shot of the two girls with their hair wrapped around each other's neck seems more of a photographer's or hairstylist's shot*, not so much a makeup artist's shot. And the lovely model with the dark hair is figured more prominently a few rows down. That second row feels redundant, a bit like padding the portfolio. However, more photos could help, as long as they're of different models and distinct looks showing even more variety in your skills. *The website's header specifies only only "makeup artist," though your listing of diplomas includes "hairstylist." If you're seeking strictly MUA work, fine, but if you're open to doing hairstyling as well, it would be a good idea to add that to your site's header. Otherwise you might get overlooked in a skills search. In your "about me" page, the plural of company is companies, not company's. And the plural of diploma is diplomas, not diploma's. As for more personal info, you could go either way. The personal info is threadbare, but would it help to have more? Not sure. Couldn't hurt, I suppose. to be a little more personal, just don't get too chatty about it. Chatty and personal could clash with the simplicity of the rest of the site. Your site lets your work speak for itself and it does so beautifully. Pricing on your site? I'll leave that for the more industry-savvy folks to comment on Nov 23 19 10:47 am Link wel yes i do hair as well! But it's not my main focus, and I don't have much pictures of it that's why I put the picture of the two girls. Maybe its better to put it in a other header. And the spelling is because I'm dutch  Thanks for telling me!!! I adjust it right away. I think I keep my personal info low key like the lay out. maybe a little bit of a very short story. Just to show a bit more of my personality. , Thanks for the feedback!! I appreciate it. Nov 23 19 01:52 pm Link amelyMUA wrote: Hi Amy, Nov 25 19 11:13 am Link I did remove the hair stuff, its not really hairstyle photo's anyway and my main focus is makeup. the pictures with the two girls, I wasn't sure either I did it because I like the project so much, but I already showed it in my blogs. And it's not really showing any makeup or hair skills I guess. And the cropping thing is because I use the Wix site to make the website and then you can choose different templates. So they cropped it for you... Still have to figure out what works best. Thank you so much for your honest feedback! Nov 25 19 03:08 pm Link In your 'SOME THOUGHTS & EXPERIENCES' blog, I would rather read something more interesting than "This was a while ago ...." Think more about how you start a story so that the first few words capture a readers interest. Make it a 'punch' line. Otherwise, along with the other advice you've taken onboard, I believe your page has improved. Nov 25 19 05:09 pm Link Camera Buff wrote: I wrote the last blog because I felt I have to post something. Nov 26 19 03:36 pm Link amelyMUA wrote: Sorry my comment was not about your whole story ... it was just about your intro line "This was a while ago ..." that I found uninteresting ... not the whole story. Nov 27 19 06:19 am Link Camera Buff wrote: Ah ok , I understand Nov 27 19 02:02 pm Link |
I'm just wondering what is interesting to read in my blog? . 