This was my first year of really focusing on photographing models and entering this part of the industry, would love to know what you all think.

Your work lacks range and diversity. All the lighting and composition are too similar. And don't let one model hog your entire portfolio. Unless she's got compromising photos of you with a goat in a motel room, there's no reason she should have that kind of leverage over you. There's a lot of redundancy in your port, even though there's not.

If this is all you got in one year of focusing on shooting models, I suggest you switch to autofocus mode. Otherwise that poor girl is gonna die of old age before you fulfill your TF obligations to her.