As I was starting out, just over a year ago, I posted a request for feedback on my portfolio. The responses I got were extremely helpful.

So here I am, a year and change later, asking for your feedback again. I'm all ears, oh masters - without some feedback it might be hard to improve!

Portfolio link (to make your life easier).

Thanks,

Tal

Sorry, but they mostly look like snap shots.  For example, you only have one that looks like it was done in a studio.  The lighting is poor and the white background is dirty.  Another example, you have a mirror shot that could have been pretty nice but once again lighting is poor (model's face is dark).  Keep punching, though.  Work with a more experience photographer and pick up some hints.

Best wishes.

I appreciate the time and effort you took in providing your feedback, and I will obviously work to get better!